Monday, September 27, 2010

Sacred

Bring him on the road
Shower with flowers
Drown with sacred hymns


My first tryst with Haiku art style of writing. It's not easy.

9 comments:

umamaheswari anandane said...

Truly beautiful...

Nanka said...

Yes of course we have just finished with the sacred chantings ,,, really a joy and great celebrations all those days.

Ramesh Sood said...

Indeed..beautiful..

The Write Girl said...

This is a lovely haiku...I especially love the last line. Love the imagery here.

Lost in thoughts said...

Thanks everybody. These encouraging words are good to hear, especially on first attempt.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Beautiful words and image. Well done. Haiku is hard but you are doing fine.


Melanie

Jingle said...

very cool piece.
well put.

Rumya said...

Divine Haiku!! :)

Leo said...

very divine..!